08 February 2009 @ 04:45 pm
[fic] Hetalia: Terror (France, UK)  
TITLE: Terror
AUTHOR: Kameko
SERIES: Hetalia
CHARACTERS: France, UK
RATING: PG
SUMMARY: Arthur pays Francis a visit in late 1793.
NOTES: France has his share of crazy, why does Russia get to have all the fun.

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It has been a long time since Arthur last set foot here. He has been smelling gunsmoke from across the water these last few years, heard the cries of Francis' people. At first it was all glorious chanting, "Liberté, Egalité, Fraternité," he'd stand guiltily at the gates of the palace and strain to listen. These days he hears only the jeers of the mob and the screams from the scaffolds, followed over and over by a dull heavy thud.

Arthur passes Versailles. He wonders if the mirrors have been pried off the walls, remembers how they dazzled when the sunlight hit them. Francis' hair had shone gold in the bright-lit ballroom where he'd taught him the gavotte.

"You came," Francis says when Arthur steps into the dark, cramped study. "I thought you might."

"What have you done with your king?" Arthur asks.

Francis laughs. "My dear brother, the age of kings is over. It is the stuff of fairy tales."

"I've always been fond of fairy tales," Arthur says, draping his long coat over an empty chair. "I've had word that you took your king and placed him in that awful device, is that true?"

"I tried a French citizen and found him guilty of crimes against the republic."

"What was his crime? What are the crimes of all the nobility whose screams I can hear from my window? Being born in a time when you've gone mad?"

Francis puts down his pen and reclines in his chair. "Their crimes are inaction, of course. They had wealth and power and influence, yet they continued to exploit the peasantry, they lifted not a finger to ease the suffering of the people so long as their own bellies were full." Francis tilts his head to the side and smiles too wide. "It's quite simple, non? They have been roadblocks to freedom, and continue to be so. We must remove them. My citizens have had enough. I have had enough."

"This is freedom, then? This is equality? Fairness?" The candle on the desk flickers and nearly goes out. "Is this what you dreamed of when you heard what my son had accomplished?"

"He had it easy, I realize now. Far from the past, a nearly blank slate, once he broke his ties with you there was little to clean up. Here in Europe it will be more difficult, we'll have to wipe things clean ourselves before we can write the new pages of history." Francis stands up and snuffs the candle, the only light now from the bright sliver of moon filtered through the dirty window. He steps forward, and his face is too close. "Why did you come?"

"You should stop this madness," Arthur says, and his mouth is dry.

"I've already murdered the king. There's no going back now." Francis' fingers are beneath Arthur's chin, tilting it upward. "It's a new age. You'll see that soon enough. Big brother will teach you, like I always do, once things are settled."

Arthur pushes Francis' hand away. "If you set foot in my country like this, I'll kill you."

Francis smiles and sits back down, relights the candle. "Be careful on your way back," he says, "You're dressed far too well to be walking these streets."

Arthur puts on his jacket and leaves without a word, hearing the furious scritch of pen on paper as he closes the door. It's quiet now, but he knows that when he lies in bed tonight he will hear echoes from across the channel again, roars and screams and thud, thud, thud. On his way back he passes Versailles once more. He knows now that the man who glimmered in the sunlight is gone.
 
 
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tdei[info]tdei on February 9th, 2009 01:13 am (UTC)
:DDD ♥♥
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: sleeping beauty[info]kameko_87 on February 9th, 2009 01:36 am (UTC)
♥ ♥ :D
Locke A. Hatte [Blaire Wish]: Hetalia:England Shoots You[info]witch_of_souls on February 9th, 2009 01:16 am (UTC)
Mnya~an~
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: sleeping beauty[info]kameko_87 on February 9th, 2009 01:37 am (UTC)
I'm going to take that as a compliment!
took the midnight train going anywhere: Okay.[info]luminousbeat on February 9th, 2009 01:17 am (UTC)
I've always favoured stories that show a beautiful darker side to all these happy sunshine countries. And I tend to like the French Revolution than other Revolutions.

This was a great story. I like how you captured the air and the feel of France at the time. It was a really bloody and vicious time back then - if I may quote Dickens, 'it was the best of times; it was the worst of times', truly.

I'm sure I could add the whole introductory paragraph to that book, but I can't remember it all. I'm a bad classic literature fan, I know.
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: sleeping beauty[info]kameko_87 on February 9th, 2009 01:55 am (UTC)
That's okay, I'm an even worse classic lit fan. *gets distracted halfway through and never finishes anything*

I love the French Revolution because you can see it start with such good intentions and just get further and further out of hand. France was messed up for a long while and everyone just seems to kind of forget about it.
x_haphazard_x: Quiz[info]x_haphazard_x on February 9th, 2009 01:20 am (UTC)
Yes! Finally! French Revolution France!

Thank you very much. :)
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: france/uk[info]kameko_87 on February 9th, 2009 01:52 am (UTC)
I hope I did him justice!
twistedsheets10[info]twistedsheets10 on February 9th, 2009 01:37 am (UTC)
HELL YEAH.

French Revolution France.

XD
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: france/uk[info]kameko_87 on February 9th, 2009 01:56 am (UTC)
WHAT A GUY right
「♥ 」⇒ [ シャーニ- ]: ☆ arthur/francis; petal of victory--uh.[info]shahni on February 9th, 2009 01:52 am (UTC)
O-Oh man... this was so, so creepy and awesome. I really love France's characterization here, as well as the time period's influence. You've done a great job of it, very well written!
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: france/uk[info]kameko_87 on February 9th, 2009 01:58 am (UTC)
Thank you! It's a very different France than I've written before so it was kind of hard.
big brother!: 【hetalia】 red intoxication[info]unasuvas on February 9th, 2009 01:57 am (UTC)
Wow, this is amazing. Now this makes me want to see more dark!France.
(Or at least, more fics where it seems like France is pulling a Russia)

"Big brother will teach you, like I always do, once things are settled."
In any other situation, this would just sound like regular pervy!France, but this time around... it was just so chilling. Mostly because I imagine him saying this with a creepy yandere expression.
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: france/uk[info]kameko_87 on February 9th, 2009 02:03 am (UTC)
Napoleonic Wars: ALL WILL BE ONE WITH FRANCE :D

Haha, I'm glad someone caught the echoes of pervy France.
big brother!: 【hetalia】 showing your ass to the enemy[info]unasuvas on February 9th, 2009 02:09 am (UTC)
"Napoleonic Wars: ALL WILL BE ONE WITH FRANCE :D"
HOLY CRAP, I was just thinking about that today WITH THAT EXACT WORDING. ilu♥

And everyone was one with France during that time (except for U.K.), weren't they?
Now I really want to see moar fanworks of Napoleonic Era!France.
wizzard890[info]wizzard890 on February 9th, 2009 01:58 am (UTC)
WICKED.

I've totally been waiting for someone to tackle this! You totally did it justice, dude. France was so dark and I could feel how painful it was for England to see him like this.

So much love ♥♥♥
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: sleeping beauty[info]kameko_87 on February 9th, 2009 02:06 am (UTC)
Thank you! It's a really interesting period, I wish I had more time to expand on it.
M-kun[info]m_dono on February 9th, 2009 02:03 am (UTC)
I think I love you XDD
Le Chevalier Deon keeps popping into mind, WAZ IZ WRONG WID MEH?
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: france/uk[info]kameko_87 on February 9th, 2009 02:09 am (UTC)
I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT THAT IS :D

Thanks!
M-kun[info]m_dono on February 10th, 2009 03:16 pm (UTC)
[Fanfarts] Dumpage~
Le Chevalier D'Eon is an anime based off a real person named D'Eon de Beaumont, a French spy for his majesty King Louie XV. There's a twist though, although set in the pre-revolutionary state of France, the story centers on the mysterious death of D'Eon's (fictional) sister, Lia and the science of Alchemy.
Asato[info]tsuzuki_inu on February 9th, 2009 02:12 am (UTC)
I thought of Chevalier, too :D
S: france[info]yuping on February 9th, 2009 02:29 am (UTC)
I wanted to see French Revolution France ♥
And he's STILL hitting on UK while he's at it, hahaha.
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: sleeping beauty[info]kameko_87 on February 9th, 2009 02:33 am (UTC)
Rain or shine, republic or Robespierre, France will always hit on UK.
trekiael[info]trekiael on April 9th, 2009 12:23 am (UTC)
...putain de merde. This sentence is the best thing ever. I'm actually stricken by its genius. The way you worded it, its simplicity, the nature/politic/sex contrast, everything. I laughed. I want it quoted, somewhere. On FrUk.
Mu[info]dmajor7th on February 9th, 2009 02:36 am (UTC)
Wow.

*bows in humbleness*
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: france/uk[info]kameko_87 on February 9th, 2009 02:40 am (UTC)
*blush* Thank you ♥
Mad-HatterArashi: Hetalia[info]madhatterarashi on February 9th, 2009 11:27 am (UTC)
I...I think I love you!
Really, I was DIEING to see something like this because I'm quite obsessed interested in the darker side of the characters and France during this period of time is one of the thing I've been thinking about for quite a long time! I really loved it! ~♥
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: france/uk[info]kameko_87 on February 10th, 2009 05:53 am (UTC)
I'm surprised at how many people were pondering on revolution!France. I hope some more people explore his crazy side!
。(ღ▻ ܫ◕): APH - UK and his eyebrows are watchin'[info]bubbole on February 9th, 2009 01:52 pm (UTC)
I do prefer serious fan fictions like this, and also you gave France the wonderful look of a revolutionary madness which filled him during that time.

I also love UK/France.
SO: A++ ♥ ♥
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: sleeping beauty[info]kameko_87 on February 10th, 2009 05:54 am (UTC)
And you get your own A++ for UK/France love, whoop whoop!
summersoltice[info]summersoltice on February 9th, 2009 08:47 pm (UTC)
I understand what France is getting at here. I was studying the Rococo period in art class. How it always showed the rich and the famous so carefree while the poor were starving and begging for things.

Poor France was just trying to make his country a better place...
a bad enough dude to rescue the president: sleeping beauty[info]kameko_87 on February 10th, 2009 05:56 am (UTC)
The best of intentions can go terribly awry. Poor dear France.
sp_kathrine: Hetalia-UK-Privateer[info]sp_kathrine on February 16th, 2009 04:28 am (UTC)
Wow, this is really good! I think I love these characters most when people depict their darkest sides. And you have detailed French Revolution France quite well. ♥

And of course, UK's POV fits fairly well into here. Love it.
trekiael[info]trekiael on April 9th, 2009 12:19 am (UTC)
aaaah! La Révolution! Good times... *wipe tear* One of the reason I love La Marseillaise so much ^^. Oh yeah, dark times, quite a failure too, prime example that it takes times and changes of generation, evolution of moral for things to change, violence only brings more violence. But that's just the rationnal part of me talking, the deep-rooted revolutionnaire in me keeps trembling in exitment when I think of those times. You portraited them so well at that time. France tried to copy England's system for a while, but it didn't work. It was when France turned very different from England politically speaking ^^.
Anyway, great job. France's madness is refreshing. wouldn't read a complete story about it, but a glimpse is good. You know, Arthur turning away in a flourish with his cloak while France snicker in the shadows gives me the image of a lion walking for a hyena he just scolded but who snickers while waiting for a chance to tease the lion again... (whatever)
M-kun[info]m_dono on May 8th, 2009 04:03 pm (UTC)
Reading this again because . . . well . . . it's brilliant XD Thanks to APH, I've gotten more into history--I even bought a book on world history, so now I understand the French Revolution better XD And might I say, you've executed it in Hetalia-Form wonderfully :)

Also, I wanted to point out, "Be careful on your way back," he says, "You're dressed far too well to be walking these streets." makes me laugh a bit. It's funny to hear that from France of all people--of all countries XD
steeple333: Ginkan omgyei~[info]steeple333 on June 5th, 2009 08:33 pm (UTC)
I love yandere Revolutionary France. .D. We do not see nearly enough of his badassery~

Funnily enough, I kept thinking of Hetalia while reading the Scarlet Pimpernel. XD;
sara_rojo[info]sara_rojo on December 3rd, 2009 01:29 pm (UTC)
Ouch, that last line...beautiful, but hurtful too
I love your take on Francis' madness. On the one hand, he is right, but going about it so very wrong. Lovely ♥